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Jan 08, 2010
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degrees of minus
Late night on a platform
smells the same in any language,
loneliness bites colder
than degrees of minus,
and thin nylon jackets
cannot contain a heart in hemorrhage.
Smokes' blue,
wreathes a face of shadows
writ by creases of pretense,
seams of failure gaping
grasping, life in slipage
fading, sliding.
He shuffles our edges of disinterest,
these hardened rails of separation,
where aching hollowness is harried
by the indecency of comfort,
where assorted refugees from routine
await allocated seating
on hopeful journeys' to revival.
Another announcement is ignored,
goes curling into darkness,
we already know of trains
and lost schedules.
smells the same in any language,
loneliness bites colder
than degrees of minus,
and thin nylon jackets
cannot contain a heart in hemorrhage.
Smokes' blue,
wreathes a face of shadows
writ by creases of pretense,
seams of failure gaping
grasping, life in slipage
fading, sliding.
He shuffles our edges of disinterest,
these hardened rails of separation,
where aching hollowness is harried
by the indecency of comfort,
where assorted refugees from routine
await allocated seating
on hopeful journeys' to revival.
Another announcement is ignored,
goes curling into darkness,
we already know of trains
and lost schedules.
— Craig Norris, Jan 08, 2010
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lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Craig
Craig Norris
16 years 4 months ago
I was in transit Lyz
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