Translucency

hand touch love hand touch memory hand touch like the sheen of fullness on summer sweet mornings hands would not have worked and it would not have made the asthetic appeal of the line break so attractive people speak like this when they are struggling to make a point I am always held in that break line of pause Thanks for noting and loving books and poetry that are somewhat eccentric peculiar is a fond art Steven

so many people are instructing me here in the city to become something better writing is a gift I cannot say this is all me this is every poet I read that has shaped how I craft too i push pretty hard ideals and expectations were beyond norm for us Illness addiction and stability were all present in our core background and passion for books and politeness following old order i did my thing until lately probably reading here getting mirrored grounded at times watching society unfold here as with out there we are all equal but with a gift what can I offer what thing can I do that is good to share a view a feeling an outcry a calm voice its so strange that as my life is crumbling as it should made of sand my poetry is become like the firm foundation that i wanted to be just the last few poems anyway in reality my life is pretty messed up and falling apart focused on things that are not meant for me somehow as this all goes on i want something half decent to be left i just have hope that the poetry is part of the better of me and as I say its a gift thank you for this question it is important steven

I so love the critique now descends into it a great line and on being understood my magic in seeing or hearing things is the now not so clear but obscure the out of focus Focus i watch lots of U Tube music videos and info links for everything I could write my poetry simpler but im afraid it is the most simplest for of me and after this long the joy of Neo is that taste is something we all offer like opinions i like that there is more comments on the new poems im working towards more simplistic writes perhaps not spoon feeding kind and there will be stanza that make no sense yet the entire work will stand on its own with that one abstract moment of lines Im glad this provoked thought its what poetry is about if a poem doesnt chew right or taste right examine it critique it look at it mull it over its the gist of workshop crafting and what Neo is about Bravo Perry like they say on CBC you are my comment of the day~