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Craig Norris
Mar 25, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

post wax

a cotton shirt
against my skin
now
is quite intense
if your lips
were
to travel there

or

came the lightest
touching
of your tongue

I think

I could not
survive
the tsunami
waves
that

that

that would bring.
— Craig Norris, Mar 25, 2010

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Craig Norris

16 years 2 months ago

Fleur

something exquisite in the sound that pleasure makes when old is found Craig
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odd molly

16 years 2 months ago

it happens that the contours

it happens that the contours are dissolved and your beauty fading slowly away I am waiting the landscape of your back the ridges of your veins I kiss your greedy electrified palms no one believes for ever and ever but I maintain life alone behind closed doors secretly we laugh in the night wine and mynth let our scents like incense mix meander always love o molly
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Craig Norris

16 years 2 months ago

darling

this is rich and beautiful, I love it totally, those lines... your greedy electrified palms, they take my breath away, but that is nothing new for you. Craig
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Zap

Hot. What more can I say, lol. Well written. XX

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