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blackseamus5
Member since May 14, 2026
Member for 4 days
Soundtrack for My Late Twenties
A throbbing bass line, guitars that sound like chainsaws
cutting through steel, and vocals that soar, blast, and blind
like Beasts from the Book of Revelation. A frenzied mob. A pit
full of flailing arms, hands, hair and everywhere flying sweat and
cheap beer. Clearly a reaction to years and years and years
of repression. Tigers pressing against the glass.
Finally
the glass breaks.
From my seat in my late fifties I remember the mania,
the blurry nights, the inexplicable black eyes, the general mayhem
at 2:35AM. The perpetual ringing in my ears
a small souvenir.
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I can’t go back to that tidal wave of adrenaline
and chainsaw ambient tones. I can remember that energy
and put it down on paper, and tell others who will see my life
as a cautionary tale. That’s okay. I also
remember crowdsurfing chaos and flying bodies
and remind myself these empty Lowell streets
still hold roaming tigers
whose hunger never ends.
blackseamus5’s timeline
- May 2026
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14 ThuReceived a critique
on Soundtrack for My Late Twenties from @Geezer
"me of sitting and watching someone in a mosh-pit. I couldn't believe all the energy in that one little space. I was asked to join in repeatedly, but I didn't believe that I could tolerate all that violent energy and not…" -
14 ThuPosted a poem
Soundtrack for My Late Twenties
"A throbbing bass line, guitars that sound like chainsaws" -
14 ThuFirst publication
Threshold, Mid August
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14 ThuJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I am a writer and painter. Big fan of Sharon Olds and Galway Kinnell. From all over the world, lived in a few cities. Now in Massachusetts. Looking to get my poems out in the world.
Location: USA
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