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raj
Feb 13, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the workshop:

Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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21st Century Trumpeteer [Sunku Workshop]

"Shit hole"
hard to fix
for Commander

Gutless
"Fire and Fury"
his empty threat

Tweeting
his Trumpets
to raise alarm

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

IRiz

IRiz

7 years 4 months ago

Interesting

Interesting
You use allusions here nicely.
Rhythm is alarming and engaging.
The first line screams.
Looks good to me.

I am not familiar with cultural refs, though. But I am sure other readers will be more understanding.

R

raj

7 years 4 months ago

Thanks for the read and to

Thanks for the read and to know you found this interesting....obviously this has reference to the compulsive and impulsive Tweeter from your home town Washington...smiles...

Regards...