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Rula
Rula
Mar 11, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the workshop:

Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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To IRiz (the lady of Sunku)

Iris
Royalty
Faith and valor

Iris
The Heaven's
Bridge to the Earth

Iris
A lady
In Sunku form

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A dedication to (Iriz). I found the name so close to one of my favorite flowers, the iris, so I thought I'd put it all in the vase of Sunku. Hope you all enjoy it.

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Rula

Rula

7 years 3 months ago

Hi loved

This is how I hear the words. Each syllable is created with one VOWEL SOUND

Ir/is
Ro /yal / ty
Faith /and / va /lor

Ir / is
The / Hea /ven's
Bridge / to / the / Earth

Ir/is
A / la /dy
In / Sun/ ku / form

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 3 months ago

very great

now pleas also see my sunku posted
sllbiiiii!!!!

IRiz

IRiz

7 years 3 months ago

Hello Rula!

Hello Rula!
I am speachless. Thank you for your wonderful poem concluding our workshop. Workshop that was enriched by your presense and talant.

I have chosen the penname just based on my first name initial and a last name fused together.
With Russian accent it does sounds like Iris,(a name of a Greek godess messanger that connects people) because we have a tendency to soften consoenants at the end of the word.
It is a very poetic member of the Olimpus.
I relate to her because I wanted to bring messages of love and kindness to the world and help to connect people together. Neopoet is a great means for the purpose.
I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Sincerely yours, Irene Riz.