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Feb 23, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
Leaf
sweet breeze
or howling gale
I fly by it
I am
a dry leaf
not held by weight
I will
love until
I crumble
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
7 years 4 months ago
think of modifying it... if you will
not hold by weight
not held!!! by... may be okay/better if u will
have you read my Feb poetry
kindly do and advise
I'm freer now till tomorrow
IRiz
7 years 4 months ago
I did . Thank you.
I did .
Thank you.
raj
7 years 4 months ago
making most of life we are
making most of life we are blessed with by overcoming adversities is what I read between the lines...at least that is how i perceived it...
loved the presentation of message....
IRiz
7 years 4 months ago
Thank you.
Thank you.