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Mar 05, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
Morning
sleepy
blue heron
on Green Lake
feathers
trembling stems
dull winter wind
clearing
their throats
crows bark like dogs
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
7 years 3 months ago
Morning Lady
another piece with great imagery and not without some humor. The last few lines make me smile.
Thank you for sharing.
raj
7 years 3 months ago
I echo Rula's comment.. "cows
I echo Rula's comment.. "cows barking like dogs".had me laughing ...this Sunku tells me that you are having lots of fun....keep it going IRiz...
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