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Feb 28, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
Morning Walk [Sunku WS]
Gentle
caress on
naked soles
Lilies
necking with
ecstatic sighs
Laughter
astounds in
Springfield wilds
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
7 years 3 months ago
What
a clever play with words here raj.
If I am not wrong this tells much about the beauty of nature. Please correct me if I'm wrong.
Regards
raj
7 years 3 months ago
You are spot on Rula. The
You are spot on Rula. The give away is in the last two words :) Thanks for being a rare visitor to my posts...
Rula
7 years 3 months ago
It's always
a great pleasure dear raj!
You are a so talented poet. I read you not only to enjoy but also to learn.
Thank you!
raj
7 years 3 months ago
Heartfelt thanks Rula for
thanks from my heart Rula for your kind words...
I do likewise with your posts too and almost always there are some good take aways...
lovedly
7 years 3 months ago
AND I have been wating like Rula says
yeah following since last millenia
yet I am unable to learn
and
poetry like you raj
churn
when will my mind burn
hopefully in its own turn