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Feb 27, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
Promise Delivered [ Sunku WS]
Seeds
of hope
burst
Bees
deliver
promise
Offspring
births from a
surrogate womb
About This Poem
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
valene
7 years 4 months ago
it's as sweet as honey
and harmonizes its flow perfectly.
Best wishes....val
raj
7 years 4 months ago
Many thanks Val
Many thanks Val
I appreciate your visit ...read and a very delightful comment
Regards and smiles...