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raj
This poem is part of the workshop:

Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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Promise Delivered [ Sunku WS]

Seeds
of hope
burst

Bees
deliver
promise

Offspring
births from a
surrogate womb

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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raj

7 years 4 months ago

Many thanks Val

Many thanks Val

I appreciate your visit ...read and a very delightful comment

Regards and smiles...