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Feb 23, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
Sunku 12 Workshop
Winter
Is over
spring is here
Showers
are coming
new life rebirths
I hear
migrant birds
from far away
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
7 years 4 months ago
Flows easily on tongues..
Flows easily on tongues...expressing the mood and changing natural scenarios. Has distinct haiku touch which is of course your forte.....you know I am your fan..
much love and regards...
Barbara Writes
7 years 4 months ago
Yeah raj
Haiku is my forte. Thanks for being fan. You always was
Barbara Writes
7 years 4 months ago
Thanks mark
Glad you visited. I think I may change dog days and enjoy the springtime. It only last but a moment. It’s a sunku so there’s not too much more to add but the captured moment of spring
lonlyhrtsclub13
7 years 4 months ago
Winter
Cannot leave fast enough. Thank you for the reminder that better days are coming.