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Feb 13, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
SunKu 2 Workshop
Dancing
Red roses
Through blue violets
Yellow
White tulips
Sway in the wind
Lovers
Holding hands
The setting sun.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
7 years 4 months ago
You have painted a great
You have painted a great picture here Barbara in this Sunku..a pleasure read...I believe you are loving this form of poetry...
regards...
Barbara Writes
7 years 4 months ago
Yes I am
I having so much fun I writing about 10 a day as well as free verse
IRiz
7 years 4 months ago
I am dancing with you, my
I am dancing with you, my friend.
Barbara Writes
7 years 4 months ago
Thanks IRiz
Glad you enjoying them
scribbler
7 years 4 months ago
Hi Carolina girl
Trust you to devise such a great example on first try...kudos
Barbara Writes
7 years 4 months ago
Hey Stan
Hey