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Feb 25, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
Sunku 6
Muse of my muse
Come hither
Awaken
Purple clouds
Dark tide
Rolling in
Hold me
Shake thoughts
Restless head
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
IRiz
7 years 4 months ago
Sounds like a beginning of a
Sounds like a beginning of a Greek Tragedy.
lonlyhrtsclub13
7 years 4 months ago
It does
Doesn't it....could be some future storytelling now that I can post again.
weirdelf
7 years 4 months ago
The form has been established
3 verses, each verse 2/3/4 syllables. But very good
https://vocaroo.com/i/s1rfYBZ9xeQ8