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Feb 26, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
Sunku 8
Grieving
Love lost
Dispair
Thinking
Future loss
Fearful
Unexplainable
Tears falling
Sadness
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
7 years 4 months ago
Sunk form has been settled
3 stanzas, 2/3/4 syllables per line. This is far off but very good. My reading
https://vocaroo.com/i/s01rcy4uVIxO
raj
7 years 3 months ago
Your Sunku does express the
Your Sunku does express the fear to move on in life after a bad experience ...the third stanza apparently expresses sadness for even thinking about moving on...
I agree with Jess that there is room to work on this to conform to Sunku ...i am sure you will be able to do it...third stanza is too open to read ...
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