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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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Sunku 8

Grieving
Love lost
Dispair

Thinking
Future loss
Fearful

Unexplainable
Tears falling
Sadness

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: New York, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Jim Morrison, Rudyard Kipling, Hermann Hesse, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, Jack London, Stephen King, there are many more....

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raj

7 years 3 months ago

Your Sunku does express the

Your Sunku does express the fear to move on in life after a bad experience ...the third stanza apparently expresses sadness for even thinking about moving on...

I agree with Jess that there is room to work on this to conform to Sunku ...i am sure you will be able to do it...third stanza is too open to read ...

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