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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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SunKu 8 Workshop

Grandkids
my heart string
home for Christmas

no water
a week in
at the hotel

Grandkids
hung out
with grandma

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Sparrow

Sparrow

7 years 4 months ago

Barbara

A great write and I love this new way,
it makes you think.
Take care of you,
Me as always, Ian. x

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

7 years 4 months ago

Thanks Ian

I appreciate you visiting my work. Glad you like it. I like writing this way. I’m gonna master it for sure