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xraycat
Member since November 4, 2010
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dreams that flow
As I sit in this field and think of you the clouds drift apart and the sun shines through.
Squeezing my eyes shut and blinking to check its true, tingling up my spine,
even before im with you.
I'm filled with the warmth that only you bring, that comforts ,that breathes relief to my soul.
Sometimes I despair that our time is so precious,
knowing that there will come a time, when the last grain of sand will pass through.
and all that i'll have is memories of you,
But then I remember how foolish I am.
We are not just the same, as these grains of sand.
For now you ARE me, as I am now you, imprinted on my soul.
Forever, today
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- November 2010
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04 ThuJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
- July 2010
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04 Sun
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04 SunReceived a critique
on dreams that flow from @raj
"I could feel the river of love meander and flow in your write...it was a pleasure to sit on the banks of that river and feel its ripples... warmly...raj (sublime_ocean)" -
03 SatReceived a critique
on dreams that flow from @judyanne
"even though punctuation still not quite right... see my above suggestion for getting around the sands of time cliche xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html" -
03 SatReceived a critique
on dreams that flow from @judyanne
"Sometimes I despair that our time is so precious, knowing that there will come a time when the last grain of sand will pass through the glass, and all that I'll have is memories of you. xxxx http://www.strategicpublishi…" -
03 SatReceived a critique
on dreams that flow from @judyanne
"so we'll have to ring them and tell them we're using it for the same computer that crashed - michelle tells me we can do that so - anytime i'm on hols at the moment - leave for sydney on the 9th, get back 30th lol judy…" -
03 SatReceived a critique
on dreams that flow from @judyanne
"'as the sand pours through the hour glass' - a bit cliche sorry, can't think of an alternative right now - will ponder it for you... love xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html" -
03 SatReceived a critique
on dreams that flow from @judyanne
"but the literary major in me will not allow it until the apostrophes and punctuation have been corrected. i offer my edit xxxxx As I sit in this field and think of you the clouds drift apart and the sun shines through…" -
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- June 2010
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30 WedReceived a critique
on dreams that flow from @Candlewitch
"this sentimental and reflective piece is lovely. I very much like how you have expressed your emotions and thoughts. My favorite lines are: but then i remember how foolish i am, we are not just the same, as these grains…" -
30 WedCritiqued
"The truth behind your words" by @Stefan
"i like how powerful few words can be, well done!" -
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dreams that flow
"As I sit in this field and think of you the clouds drift apart and the sun shines through." -
07 MonPosted a poem
the unwanted
- May 2010
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08 SatCritiqued
"Ageing Gracefully" by @artygirl87
"I can see why she cried, this is really good, you show so much thought and respect in your words, beautiful! cat xx" -
08 SatCritiqued
"The Generation Gap" by @judyanne
"very interesting and observant, or should i say, wow, your poem was sick and your sense of humour is wicked, good work judy xx" -
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GONE
- April 2010
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OCEAN
- March 2010
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HOW TO LOOK GOOD NAKED......
"Im going to get you naked, and parade you down the street," -
29 MonPosted a poem
How to look good naked
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28 Sun
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27 SatFirst critique offered
on "Meet My Ex" by @artygirl87
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27 SatFirst publication
Amma
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15 MonHighest posting month
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