Dark.Poetress

Member since March 23, 2012

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Lullaby for a princess

Posted Jul 18, 2010 · 13 lines · 1 critiques

My princess please come to me,
My lullaby a to sooth your ache.

Your pain I see,
Let me take.

Your pain can leave with me,
I can take the pain for your sake.

I take my relief,
I have special ways.

I am a pain theif,
When I leave the pain never stays.

I am the relief of pain,
But I'm also the one with nothing to lose or gain.

~Ash Knight

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March 2022
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10 years of membership
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5 years of membership
March 2013
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One year of membership
March 2012
23 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
July 2010
18 Sun

Received a critique
on Lullaby for a princess from @magics02
"May I tweak this up a tad bit for you here if you don't mind My princess will you please come to me My lullaby to share and sooth your ache Your pain I see Let me take Your pain, may you leave it with me I shall take th…"
18 Sun

Posted a poem
Lullaby for a princess
"My princess please come to me,"
Open thread 13 lines
June 2010
01 Tue

Received a critique
on The one who knows from @magics02
"I think that one is not fixed up yet and sorry I have been away and have not had a chance to come back here, My apology to you. Keep on the writing and learn all you can of it. Mona"
May 2010
30 Sun

Posted a poem
Friends with the enemy by Ash Knight & Vicki Evans
" "What do you want?" Raven asked, not looking at the man she knew had come to take her away from another family and back to another building full of other braty kids like herself."
Open thread 15 lines
29 Sat

Received a critique
on I wanna' get away from @BrightEyed
"so sad and so full of desperation tho quite beautiful none the less. Cant wait to read more. your friend, bright eyed"
27 Thu

Posted a poem
I wanna' get away
"             I wanna' get away,"
Open thread 18 lines
March 2010
15 Mon

Highest posting month
March 2010 — 8 poems
February 2010
06 Sat

Most-discussed work
Cry for the wild

12 critiques to date.
January 2010
13 Wed

First critique offered
on "Bad luck charm (Sleeping Beauty)" by @Ink Dragon
December 2009
23 Wed

First publication
never say never/forever