frangipangi

Member since January 20, 2008

Member for 18 years, 4 months

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Haiku (no title)

Posted Mar 20, 2010 · 3 lines · 1 critiques

Heavy winter snows lay
Ice drips gather quickly to streams
Crocus smiles hello

frangipangi’s timeline

January 2023
19 Thu

Anniversary
15 years of membership
January 2018
19 Fri

Anniversary
10 years of membership
January 2013
19 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
July 2010
02 Fri

Critiqued
"This Round Is On Me" by @paul
"Wonderful! Frangi"
02 Fri

Critiqued
"Hobbit Hike" by @Lonnie
"wonderful! Fran"
02 Fri

Critiqued
"This Round Is On Me" by @paul
"Paul, frustrated by life's rough and tumble, you re-group, square your shoulders, take a deep breath and give life a kick-in-ass AGAIN! Great write Paul. Love Always, Frangi"
02 Fri

Critiqued
"Hobbit Hike" by @Lonnie
"Hobbit Hike is classic lyrical and beautifully written. Lilting and lighthearted but deliberately crystal clear, I see the thistledown, I hear the insects and crickets and toads, and I now I sleep! Thank you Lonnie, you…"
May 2010
27 Thu

Critiqued
"360°" by @Hooded Stranger
"Oooohhhhh you are sooo,so talented. THANK YOU Hooded. Fran"
04 Tue

Received a critique
on The Coffee and the Moon from @magics02
"5 stars and then some more and off to the coffee I so adore and the moon!! You did a great job with this one. Loved it Love, Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived"
04 Tue

Received a critique
on The Coffee and the Moon from @Seren
"I loved your poem as I loved the same line as Chrys is it the coffee or the moon as Chrys said food for thought love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear…"
04 Tue

Received a critique
on The Coffee and the Moon from @poewriter58
"and I that Drink(s) the moon ? First off let me say you have an excellent title, it drew me in a lot of thought went into this work and it shows. What an interesting and refreshing question. " Is it the coffee or the mo…"
March 2010
21 Sun

Received a critique
on Haiku (no title) from @Kailashana
"Niiiiiiice! ~A Words must be used like stepping stones: lightly and with nimbleness, because if you step on them too heavily, you incur the danger of falling into the intellectual mire of logic and reason. - Balsekar"
20 Sat

Posted a poem
Haiku (no title)
"Heavy winter snows lay"
Open thread 3 lines
February 2010
01 Mon

Posted a poem
chat alchemy
"Neo talk smile giggling"
Open thread 3 lines
January 2010
19 Tue

Received a critique
on LOVE A FAIRY, LEAVE A FAIRY from @magics02
"An old piece and I just love it ..macaroni,,,candle lite and Old blue eyes..all the memories love this one and have you written anymore lately... honestly.. magics02 aka Mona"
October 2009
25 Sun

Critiqued
"Telling Secrets" by @greeneyes
"Playful, whimsical, magical Thank you Geeneyes. Words done well! I do enjoy. Peace, frangipangi"
23 Fri

Critiqued
"Last Minute Heaven" by @Seren
"Seren, This is so gently beautiful, yet so powerful. Like the breath of death... Thank you for exquisite imagery and intelligent fantasy. Most enjoyable Yours, Frangipangi"
June 2009
09 Tue

Critiqued
"Inner Child" by @paul
"This is just what I needed, encouragement. I can remember to tap that endless resource, my inner child and be renewed. Thank you Paul, for giving hope. Well done master wordsmith, well done. Frang"
02 Tue

Received a critique
on LOVE A FAIRY, LEAVE A FAIRY from @weirdelf
"please forgive me. You know I hate love poems but this is much more. It is sharing, loving and excellent poetry, not a word out of place. And I feel your loss. cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present."
April 2009
06 Mon

Received a critique
on LOVE A FAIRY, LEAVE A FAIRY from @professor
"Have not seen you around in a while. This is a beautiful sensual tribute with a mixture of both direct and indirect sexual imagery that i enjoyed. The ending was of course unexpected but it had the effect of lightening…"
05 Sun

Posted a poem
LOVE A FAIRY, LEAVE A FAIRY
"Love a Fairy, Leave a Fairy"
Open thread 59 lines
January 2009
19 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
July 2008
18 Fri

Received a critique
on THE BOYS from @weirdelf
"it's nice to be the cool uncle without having to discipline. cheers, Jess"
June 2008
06 Fri

Most-discussed work
MOONBEAM

14 critiques to date.
06 Fri

Posted a poem
MOONBEAM
"I am a wisp of a whisper"
Open thread 29 lines
January 2008
28 Mon

Posted a poem
Haiku
"Lovely spread lady"
Open thread 4 lines
28 Mon

Posted a poem
THE BOYS
"Little feet bang, bang, banging"
Open thread 20 lines
28 Mon

Posted a poem
haiku
"babies watching me"
Open thread 3 lines
28 Mon

Posted a poem
Haiku
"Smile lit with gold"
Open thread 3 lines
25 Fri

Posted a poem
THE WIND DAY
" "
Open thread 14 lines
22 Tue

First critique offered
on "Plug " by @IKnowNoBox
20 Sun

Posted a poem
(An excerpt from) THE MAN
"            "
Open thread 5 lines
20 Sun

Posted a poem
Miranda Penniwinkle and the lagoon goons (excerpt)
"   The hallway was silent except for the far off drone of a lawnmower which summoned to the mind of Miranda Penniwinkle the picture of a gigantic bumble bee, lazily buzzing searching for a giant flower, it’s huge girth casting a giant shadow upon the earth and the draft from it’s massive wings creating whirlwinds uprooting trees, lifting cars and lawn furniture in it’s quake, an ominous and dark mass of stuff trailing behind the behemoth. Miranda could feel the swoosh and draft as the drone filled her ears and became so loud she could not think. The hairs were rising on back of her neck and real terror gripped her gut when she looked up to see Mr. Tandy standing over her, his pale, thin frame casting a narrow shadow across her face. He was unusually cross and yelling, “ Ms Penniwinkle! WAKE UP!” Miranda jumped out of the seat and nearly stood at attention."
Open thread 1 lines
19 Sat

First publication
A pitcher of bitterness, a taste of sacrifice, a house of delight (since unpublished)
19 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
15 Tue

Highest posting month
January 2008 — 7 poems