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Jane A. Rug
Member since June 13, 2023
Member for 2 years, 11 months
Tomb morrow the United States commonwealth doth goeth to the dogs
Tomb morrow the United States commonwealth doth goeth to the dogs
Though the two hundred and fiftieth anniversary for what will purportedly commence (and fast approaching the July fifth, two thousand and twenty sixth after the common era), that idealistic mantra videlicet rocking in the free world, which lyric courtesy Neil Young wrote within the album titled Freedom officially released on October 2,1989 did not make the year-end or overall Billboard Hot 100 for 1989, but nevertheless became a massive rock staple, and primarily a radio and MTV hit. It ultimately peaked at No. 2 on the Billboard Mainstream Rock Tracks chart said though provoking words found of his would be quite antithetical today, and more to the point farther removed from the reality of Nouveau riche (French for "new rich") describes individuals who have recently acquired wealth within their own lifetime, rather than through familial inheritance approximately thirty seven years since since said album, and as the date of this poem, the one percent of global billionaires wield according to the Wealth Distribution Pyramid e-gypped the less financially solvent the current U.S. wealth distribution reflects a historic gap, with the top 10% holding roughly two-thirds of the nation's household net worth. Driven by real estate and financial asset gains, the minimum net worth threshold to be in the top 10% is $2.2 million, while median household net worth sits around $192,900.
Apocalypse now
finds more than old rotten Gotham
slipping into the behavioral sink,
especially when seen
thru the eyes of an ancient mariner,
or a contemporary earthling linkedin
as a solitary Homo sapiens
living social within the latter part
of the second decade
of the twenty first century
versus a voyager
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referencing an ancient mariner
a braggart boasting
to his landlubber brethren
sailing across the seven seas,
when in truth
the number of sizable water bodies
populating planet earth
no single universally
agreed-upon number
because a "sea"
(sometimes defined
as just a subdivision
of an ocean,
experts, geographers,
and the National Ocean Service
generally recognize
between fifty and
one hundred seas worldwide
the discrepancy linkedin
to nonstandard naming conventions
predicated on various and sundry
naming traditions encompassing
great swaths of aitch two owe
nowadays referencing
and used poetically
to refer to the world's
five major oceans
(Pacific, Atlantic, Indian,
Southern, and Arctic)
along with the division
of the Pacific and Atlantic
into North and South.
In my humble opinion (with no academic credential in economics), I believe we (incorporating thee entire global population) exhibits the greatest monetary disparity between the haves and the have nots, one of which person includes mister word smith here, a Caucasian heterosexual latitudinarian, nonestablishmentarian, Pennsylvanian, proletarian, sexagenarian and Unitarian typing these words, who ofttimes feels sorely tempted to strike up a Faustian bargain in an effort to accumulate adequate legal tender, but would shudder to deliver misfortune on the heads of me wife and mother of our two grown daughters, the eldest exceeding far beyond the economic range of her dirty deeds done dirt cheap to render me dirt poor, and I asked Google is the disparity between the financial haves and have not most acute today? and the unsurprising response - Yes, the financial disparity between the rich and the poor is at a modern peak. In the United States, the top 1% holds roughly $55 trillion in wealth—equaling the combined net worth of the bottom 90%. Meanwhile, the bottom 50% of households hold just 2.5% of total wealth.
The forefathers/mothers would be aghast
how soon to be minted
trillionaires would blast
every cotton picking
socially progressive program classed
for the less fortunate or lucky enough
to win PowerBall
or Megamillion drawing
kept invisibly glassed
within a virtual encasement
and impossible mission
to break free and clearly hast
(an archaic English verb
meaning "have" linkedin
to second-person singular
present tense of the verb "to have"
(e.g., "Thou hast" means "You have")
ist mostly obsolete,
and frequently encountered
in older literature, poetry,
and religious texts
like the King James Bible
original document mostly
preserved within icecast
and air tight chambers
cause they would
most likely disintegrate
in open air and possibly
be nibbled by mice
which critters would inadvertently
find themselves as holy creatures
and revered in Nice
fetching quite a handsome
chunk of cheese
far exceeding the general price
to eat for any cracker.
Jane A. Rug’s timeline
- June 2026
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07 SunReceived a critique
on Citizens Bank checking account... from @patrickgadoury
"I can’t lie, I do kinda respect the mad rush here. It feels like the speaker got hit by one bank problem and somehow the whole universe got dragged into the complaint with it. It's possible I don't always "get" stream o…" -
07 SunReceived a critique
on Tomb morrow the United States commonwealth doth goeth to the dogs from @Geezer
"the Feudal system is alive and well here, in the so-called Free-World. Huh! Free world? There will be none of that here! The royalty of C.E.O.s, upper-class nobility with their vassals and peasants all lined up to meet…" -
06 SatPosted a poem
Tomb morrow the United States commonwealth doth goeth to the dogs
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05 FriReceived a critique
on Where oh where did the last forty nine years go? from @Geezer
"I think that you have got it straight. It's history repeating itself, just like they said it would. Just a new slant on the old story, "You are wrong, I am right." The only thing that perturbs me, is the worthlessness o…" -
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03 WedPosted a poem
From: Matthew Scott to his youngest daughter
"From: Matthew Scott to his youngest daughter" - January 2025
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15 WedHighest posting month
January 2025 — 21 poems
- July 2024
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16 TueFirst critique offered
on "H8mongers Need Not Apply" by @Mary Beth Magee
- June 2024
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13 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2024
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19 FriPosting milestone
100 poems posted
- June 2023
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13 TueFirst publication
Procreation begets immortality
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13 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Despite the onslaught of paparazzi, I (an eccentric and opportunistic kindhearted sexagenarian - born January xiii, mcmlix at The Christ Hospital within Mount Auburn, Ohio) instantaneously shied away from the spot (klieg) lights, and avoided crowdsource most of my iv and lx orbitz round the earth mainly on account of being gifted with introvertedness somewhat minimized by chomping on powder milk biscuits, which magically mysterious and top secret ingredients gave this once painfully shy person formidable courage to face fearful fixes such as getting up out of bed first thing in the morning and crafting one or more essays, poems, vignettes, et cetera.
Location: PA, USA
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