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Jul 13, 2007
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Shittyhawk
Come on, cruise into our lives.
Stirring up strife, like stirring up sediment from the bottom of the harbour.
Emptying your hull of short back n’side.
Dipping your rusty metal inot our pristine harbour.
I’ve walked past your expanse everyday you’ve been here.
Is 2mil a day from a 2faced allie worth it?
Can’t wait to see the back of you passing through the heads.
— Fleur MacDonald, Jul 13, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
I wonder how many Americans
Conect11
18 years 11 months ago
you know
Fleur MacDonald
18 years 11 months ago
war
A. M. Painter
18 years 11 months ago
well
stardream
18 years 11 months ago
i love your writing fm!
Craig Norris
17 years ago
your attitude has hardened somewhat since art school
Fleur MacDonald
17 years ago
Not really
Craig Norris
17 years ago
No I haven't
Fleur MacDonald
17 years ago
Roughly 5000 crew
Skumpfsklub
17 years ago
Yeah, it's a big sucker, ain't it?
Fleur MacDonald
17 years ago
Man that was
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