Quillsvein1

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Impressions (after looking at Van Gogh's "Sunflower")

Posted Jan 30, 2010 · 17 lines · 2 critiques

Angry beige cornea in dried sunflower,

The ghost signature a lost

pulse skeleton

Serrated jelly foliage I

am the fifteenth

nearing it’s bitter end

I am the dried leaf about to burst apart

In strands of foliage desperate

wind broken hair

A peering stitched black eyes in

the broken necked sunflower

Stitched acrylic cartoon bled summer

Snail broken wind grass joy,

disarrayed objects

Vase sink and confused orange blunder

Palette melted in paint stroke

Orange follicles balding winds treat love

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March 2010
15 Mon

Received a critique
on hum from @Kassie
"I always love reading poems about writing poems - not sure how to express it but its always sort of humorously ironic in a weird kind of way ... anyway I think my babbling has become a little nonsensical i better stop =…"
02 Tue

Received a critique
on Impressions (after looking at Van Gogh's "Sunflower") from @Pamela A. Lamppa
"Hello Congratulations! Your poem has been nominated for the New Advocate's Spotlight award. The following detailed critique will be considered in the decision making process. I think you have handled the descriptive tel…"
February 2010
19 Fri

Received a critique
on Impressions (after looking at Van Gogh's "Sunflower") from @yenti
"If you take all the petals off one side it would look like the painter, lol, Sorry just had to say that, this is a good picture of a painting but is copying , so it would be better to find your own flower to paint but a…"
January 2010
30 Sat

Posted a poem
Impressions (after looking at Van Gogh's "Sunflower")
"Angry beige cornea in dried sunflower,"
Open thread 17 lines
21 Thu

Posted a poem
hum
"The buzzing hum of solitude;"
Open thread 15 lines
17 Sun

Posted a poem
(Untitled)
"Alone, fixing himself"
Open thread 48 lines
November 2009
19 Thu

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100 poems posted
January 2009
30 Fri

Most-discussed work
I Am Not

11 critiques to date.
June 2008
22 Sun

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One year of membership
July 2007
15 Sun

Highest posting month
July 2007 — 13 poems
June 2007
24 Sun

First critique offered
on "THE WONDER WHEEL" by @Michael F Vinning
24 Sun

First publication
"Still Life at 19"
22 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 2 days later.

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Impressions (after looking at Van Gogh's "Sunflower")

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Impressions (after looking at Van Gogh's "Sunflower")

hum

(Untitled)

100 poems posted

I Am Not

One year of membership

July 2007 — 13 poems

on "THE WONDER WHEEL" by @Michael F Vinning

"Still Life at 19"

Membership begins

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