Shadowteller

Member since January 21, 2009

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There

Posted Jan 18, 2010 · 5 lines · 3 critiques

This poem
Has become
Empty
Returning
Endlessly

Shadowteller’s timeline

January 2024
20 Sat

Anniversary
15 years of membership
January 2019
20 Sun

Anniversary
10 years of membership
January 2014
20 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
January 2010
26 Tue

Received a critique
on There from @big-Alzer
"hey Chris this is short and sweet a good play with words. it gets the thumbs up."
20 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
18 Mon

Received a critique
on There from @Seren
"this grabbed me ... you got a winner with this one i love it ... :) cannot see anything to fault in so few words but it has impact kind regards Jayne-Chloe"
18 Mon

Posted a poem
There
"This poem"
Open thread 5 lines
August 2009
22 Sat

Received a critique
on Entomo Necro from @Electric Blue
"Shadowteller I love the story you weave and the rhyme I was there all the way through Always blue"
July 2009
06 Mon

Received a critique
on Entomo Necro from @weirdelf
"Now tell us why you don't kill yourself. Cheers, Jess"
05 Sun

Received a critique
on Entomo Necro from @Ink Dragon
"I second Cat and Jess, the end might need some work, here's an on the spot suggestion: Where spiders die Where they stop and stare Where life isn’t fair Where no one cares Is where I live I'm looking forward to your rev…"
05 Sun

Received a critique
on Entomo Necro from @Candlewitch
"I liked everything but the ending which I thought was weak and detracted from the excellent construction of the rest of the poem. Always, Cat"
05 Sun

Received a critique
on Entomo Necro from @infinite_dwarf
"I unfortunately have to agree with Cat, the beginning and middle came through so strong - and the imagery was enough to make me cringe, as I fear bugs. Believe me, that reaction is not a bad thing - it shows that you ar…"
05 Sun

Received a critique
on Entomo Necro from @Seren
"Something, is more than better than nothing .. this one is good but needs a little work on the flow I am a little tired at the moment but will come back later and have a look and see what it is .. cant put my finger on…"
05 Sun

Posted a poem
Entomo Necro
"I live in a place"
Open thread 24 lines
April 2009
10 Fri

Posted a poem
Away
"absent"
Open thread 4 lines
March 2009
17 Tue

Critiqued
"a pair of shoes" by @big-Alzer
"this poem. Though I like all the lines, my favorite are the last stanza-- "some people watch and whisper others heckle all the day, i would’nt want to walk in their shoe’s what do they know anyway." I like the flow and…"
February 2009
20 Fri

Posted a poem
Nonsense
"None"
Open thread 8 lines
06 Fri

Posted a poem
The Prophetess
"------------------------"
Open thread 26 lines
January 2009
31 Sat

Critiqued
"Dander " by @IKnowNoBox
"the imagery that I receive from reading the poem."
31 Sat

Critiqued
" i had a dream" by @big-Alzer
"and your word usage. Emotion and feeling is definitely present. I like how it started and how it ended, and everything in between made sense. Looking forward in seeing more of your poems."
31 Sat

Critiqued
"ex post facto" by @RSScheerer
"this poem, there's a lot in it that I like. I've found a lot of favorite lines throughout."
31 Sat

Critiqued
"Memories Be Still" by @poewriter58
"this poem, my favorite part are the lines in the fourth stanza. "No hand shall guide this wandering soul No voice shall echo laughter Adrift on the sea of nevermore For now and ever after""
30 Fri

Posted a poem
Mind Tripper
"It slithers and climbs"
Open thread 19 lines
28 Wed

Critiqued
"Real AIL ( Man Flu )" by @big-Alzer
"with the above. The repetition of the "Its the man flu I tell you" is a bit much. The usage of about half or a third of them would've been sufficient for the reader. There is a lot of potential for this poem."
28 Wed

Critiqued
"i wonder" by @big-Alzer
"is a nice little write."
28 Wed

Posted a poem
Formal Affair
" "
Open thread 22 lines
26 Mon

Critiqued
"Death" by @Electric Blue
"I can feel the somberness, the sadness from it, and the spacing says a lot too. So simple...yet so dark. I know what it's like to have your heart ripped apart with a dead feeling left behind. It's not pleasant. Very goo…"
26 Mon

Posted a poem
Loss
"I gave her a kiss"
Open thread 19 lines
24 Sat

First critique offered
on "I am really fucking angry" by @weirdelf
24 Sat

Posted a poem
A Gasping Cycle
"living"
Open thread 11 lines
22 Thu

Posted a poem
Sinful Beauty
"Her lips were soft"
Open thread 16 lines
21 Wed

First publication
Mind
21 Wed

Posted a poem
Mind
"In my mind, looming around the corner I possess"
Open thread 27 lines
20 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
15 Thu

Highest posting month
January 2009 — 6 poems