thomassbaby

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Depth Of My Soul

Posted May 29, 2010 · 10 lines · 1 critiques

                                                                                   In the depth of my soul,
                                                                                        I was in control.
                                                                               But my emotions took hold,
                                                                         And my soul was left to be torn.
                                                                      I didn't have any accusations to say,
                                                                  When I found out I could see you today.
                                                                             You were in my life before,
                                                                        But we left and I turned to stone.
                                                                       With the depth of my love for you,
                                                                                 Broken and all alone.

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May 2010
29 Sat

Received a critique
on Depth Of My Soul from @Arrow
"endearingly simple but I found the end confusing. I think of stone as hard and as inconsistent with love. I also think of love as giving strength and not as resulting in brokenness or coldness. That is something else, I…"
29 Sat

Posted a poem
Depth Of My Soul
"                                                                                   In the depth of my soul,"
Open thread 10 lines
27 Thu

Received a critique
on We Belong from @U K Atiyodi
"A philosophy of the youth. Spiritually...Why not intellectually? I like it"
27 Thu

Received a critique
on We Belong from @Mnemonic
"my first day on this site but not the last.your poem is incredible and the emotions there in are those i can say-i have had at one point in time... isaac cliff uganda"
27 Thu

Received a critique
on We Belong from @xena465
"Very nice love poem. It's good to see you back with a new post. Rosina xena465"
27 Thu

Posted a poem
We Belong
"I've wanted you back"
Open thread 25 lines
July 2009
30 Thu

Received a critique
on To My Friend Rick from @Pen Name
"good job Pen Name"
28 Tue

Posted a poem
To My Friend Rick
"I never thought that this would be"
Open thread 26 lines
October 2008
19 Sun

Received a critique
on Dont Try To Make Me from @orgami
"so used to seeing men I say this again but true writing their love sonnets Myself included I love it when a woman writes (because women writers where what got me writing in the first place) I agree with Eddie about valu…"
17 Fri

Received a critique
on Dont Try To Make Me from @Eduardo Cruz
"I like your values, and the stand you take. I just have a problem with these two lines: "i do i guess love you too" a sounds run on i believe you need a comma after, "I do" "so don't try getting me to come back", I thin…"
17 Fri

Posted a poem
Dont Try To Make Me
"falling for you"
Open thread 25 lines
January 2008
16 Wed

Received a critique
on Lost Sister from @Sinbadthesailorman
"more thought out and desinged of the your works I have read so far but you posses the qualities and the wording of a up and comming poet I think once you have put it to paper you leave it As I do most of the time but I…"
11 Fri

Posted a poem
Forget You
"what is wrong with you"
Open thread 17 lines
09 Wed

Posted a poem
CONFUSED
"i am confused today"
Open thread 10 lines
07 Mon

Posted a poem
BEING WITH YOU GIVES ME WINGS
"BEING WITH YOU GIVES ME WINGS"
Open thread 23 lines
07 Mon

Posted a poem
Cuts
"GRABBING A KNIFE,"
Open thread 17 lines
December 2007
20 Thu

Posted a poem
Through One Ear And Out The Other
"i hate people who try to put you down"
Open thread 22 lines
20 Thu

Posted a poem
Killing Yourself
"people always think"
Open thread 19 lines
20 Thu

Posted a poem
Respect For Others
"having people know"
Open thread 16 lines
20 Thu

Posted a poem
Women To Be Free Again
"why should i let it bother me"
Open thread 20 lines
18 Tue

Critiqued
"bla" by @aswearenow
"i have to say that Bla is interesting although i do have to agree with Damon even thou i dont kno that person it should be bla bla not just one bla but i do understand what you mena about it and all its a good poem"
18 Tue

Critiqued
"CARPE NARCISSUS" by @meic
"it was interesting...nice"
18 Tue

First critique offered
on "CARPE NARCISSUS" by @meic
17 Mon

First publication
Lost Sister
15 Sat

Highest posting month
December 2007 — 19 poems

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on Depth Of My Soul from @Arrow

on We Belong from @U K Atiyodi

on We Belong from @Mnemonic

on We Belong from @xena465

on To My Friend Rick from @Pen Name

on Dont Try To Make Me from @orgami

on Dont Try To Make Me from @Eduardo Cruz

on Lost Sister from @Sinbadthesailorman

"bla" by @aswearenow

"CARPE NARCISSUS" by @meic

on "CARPE NARCISSUS" by @meic

December 2007 — 19 poems

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