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thomassbaby
Member since January 29, 2011
Member for 15 years, 4 months
Depth Of My Soul
In the depth of my soul,
I was in control.
But my emotions took hold,
And my soul was left to be torn.
I didn't have any accusations to say,
When I found out I could see you today.
You were in my life before,
But we left and I turned to stone.
With the depth of my love for you,
Broken and all alone.
thomassbaby’s timeline
- January 2026
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29 ThuAnniversary
15 years of membership
- January 2021
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29 FriAnniversary
10 years of membership
- January 2016
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29 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2012
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29 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2011
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29 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- May 2010
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29 SatReceived a critique
on Depth Of My Soul from @Arrow
"endearingly simple but I found the end confusing. I think of stone as hard and as inconsistent with love. I also think of love as giving strength and not as resulting in brokenness or coldness. That is something else, I…" -
29 SatPosted a poem
Depth Of My Soul
" In the depth of my soul," -
27 ThuReceived a critique
on We Belong from @U K Atiyodi
"A philosophy of the youth. Spiritually...Why not intellectually? I like it" -
27 Thu
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27 Thu
- July 2009
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28 Tue
- December 2007
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18 TueFirst critique offered
on "CARPE NARCISSUS" by @meic
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17 MonFirst publication
Lost Sister
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15 SatHighest posting month
December 2007 — 19 poems
About Me
Recent Work
Depth Of My Soul
We Belong
To My Friend Rick
Dont Try To Make Me
Forget You
CONFUSED
BEING WITH YOU GIVES ME WINGS
Cuts
Killing Yourself
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