Mistyone

Member since January 9, 2011

Member for 15 years, 5 months

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24 Poems

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Destiny

Posted Feb 17, 2009 · 12 lines · 1 critiques

Flow like a river,
reach the shining sea.

Cover,
secrets of the deep.

Fall down like rain,
cause memories to make.
Come close like tide to ocean shore,
open up wings, be free.

Whisper like wind,
through branches of soul.

Help me flee,
great destiny.

Mistyone’s timeline

January 2026
09 Fri

Anniversary
15 years of membership
January 2021
09 Sat

Anniversary
10 years of membership
January 2016
09 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
January 2012
09 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
January 2011
09 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
March 2009
07 Sat

Received a critique
on Destiny from @yenti
"Just a little untidy in there, lovely way with words and they sang out, they need to find their place in the song, Yours Ian.T"
February 2009
17 Tue

Critiqued
"The Fire In My Blood" by @Race_9togo
"beautiful"
17 Tue

Posted a poem
Destiny
"Flow like a river,"
Open thread 12 lines
January 2009
29 Thu

Received a critique
on Masking Me Uncaringly from @W.C.Wampler
"A5, This is designed to help your self. Good questions here. Write again about a posative direction. Then again. When what's behind the mask is revealed, one may as well take it off, and lay it down. Then again, what do…"
28 Wed

Posted a poem
Masking Me Uncaringly
"Mask that unfortunately,"
Open thread 22 lines
27 Tue

Received a critique
on Clock from @Conect11
"the improvement in your poetry over the last two years is palpable. This is intelligent, well paced, and deceptively simple, as Jim said. Your repetition, theme, and timing really work well here. This belies a wisdom I…"
27 Tue

Received a critique
on Clock from @Race_9togo
"I keep coming back to this after I've read it, again and again. It is deceptively simple, yet with a very clear message I like the structure very much, but the commas at the end of "clock" and "time" keep breaking the f…"
26 Mon

Posted a poem
Clock
"Always hear people say,"
Open thread 14 lines
05 Mon

Received a critique
on On the Table from @Quillsvein1
"have a real talent for imagery and sound--the two components that basically make up what poetry is--and this does indeed captivate. "Ashes of smoke, filled the crystal cup/A little salt/to curb the tastes." Neat! The on…"
05 Mon

Posted a poem
On the Table
"Ashes of smoke,"
Open thread 18 lines
04 Sun

Received a critique
on A Little Crowded Mind from @Pugilist
"Firstly, I love the title and, for the most part, the word choice. The word order, however, stumbles in some places and some of the punctuation causes the poem to screech to a halt. Putting on my pointy hat of pretentio…"
03 Sat

Received a critique
on Let Me Go from @Rett
"Reads very smoothly. I enjoyed the read. Thank you. Respectfully, Rett: "It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside." Purplemoondoll"
December 2008
30 Tue

Posted a poem
A Little Crowded Mind
"Sweet smell of orchids,"
Open thread 11 lines
29 Mon

Posted a poem
Let Me Go
"Don't hold my heart in,"
Open thread 14 lines
September 2007
04 Tue

Received a critique
on When I wake from @Prototype
"Well I like it! "the time it takes to make you and I, we" - Cool!"
August 2007
08 Wed

Critiqued
"first kiss" by @lithium flower
"really a good poem I liked it alot it has feeling good job keep writing"
June 2007
15 Fri

Critiqued
"The Wave" by @weirdelf
"I liked it you are a very good writer even at the age of 12"
15 Fri

First critique offered
on "The Wave" by @weirdelf
15 Fri

Posted a poem
Lie To Me
"Lie to me pain"
Open thread 8 lines
15 Fri

Posted a poem
The Red Fountain
"The red fountain"
Open thread 6 lines
15 Fri

Posted a poem
Lonely
"Lonely eyes don’t cry"
Open thread 14 lines
15 Fri

Highest posting month
June 2007 — 11 poems
14 Thu

Posted a poem
Lonely Night
"Lonely night"
Open thread 14 lines
14 Thu

Posted a poem
Prisoner
"Shadow that lingers about,"
Open thread 10 lines
13 Wed

Posted a poem
Desert
"Desert that cracks,"
Open thread 14 lines
04 Mon

First publication
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