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thomassbaby
Member since January 29, 2011
Member for 15 years, 4 months
Depth Of My Soul
In the depth of my soul,
I was in control.
But my emotions took hold,
And my soul was left to be torn.
I didn't have any accusations to say,
When I found out I could see you today.
You were in my life before,
But we left and I turned to stone.
With the depth of my love for you,
Broken and all alone.
thomassbaby’s timeline
- January 2026
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29 ThuAnniversary
15 years of membership
- January 2021
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29 FriAnniversary
10 years of membership
- January 2016
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29 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2012
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29 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2011
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29 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- May 2010
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29 SatReceived a critique
on Depth Of My Soul from @Arrow
"endearingly simple but I found the end confusing. I think of stone as hard and as inconsistent with love. I also think of love as giving strength and not as resulting in brokenness or coldness. That is something else, I…" -
29 SatPosted a poem
Depth Of My Soul
" In the depth of my soul," -
27 ThuReceived a critique
on We Belong from @U K Atiyodi
"A philosophy of the youth. Spiritually...Why not intellectually? I like it" -
27 Thu
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27 Thu
- July 2009
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28 Tue
- December 2007
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18 TueFirst critique offered
on "CARPE NARCISSUS" by @meic
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17 MonFirst publication
Lost Sister
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15 SatHighest posting month
December 2007 — 19 poems
About Me
Recent Work
Respect For Others
Women To Be Free Again
BURNED IN HELL
HELP ME
NOT REAL
TOGETHER YOU AND I
Love By Thy Name
Drifting Away
Lost Relationship
I'm Free
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