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2Q
2 Quills
Member since July 18, 2009
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Unveiling Time
Wise men wrote with rooted past
Of knowledge keen that time won’t last
An age shall pass but leave its scars
Of fortunes told held by the stars
The course is set, I’ve placed my bid
Align thy piece within its grid
To each his own I’ve found my place
Thus watch me move into this space
Knights have valor it’s quite well known
While kings have queens beside their throne
Get what you can while you still have time
To soon will end this riddled rhyme
The end of days unveils the truth
Of what was missed within our youth
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And when you gaze upon your star
The light is key, it’s who you are
Father time he harkens near
Forget me not a wolf was here
Words speak loud without much proof
Yet who’d have guessed that it’s the truth
Of what I speak just made up stories
Yet in too deep you’ll see my glories
Champs will conquer this life’s charade
That duality’s role seeks to evade
Life in white or life in black
Simplicity works where colors lack
2 Quills’s timeline
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- March 2010
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10 WedReceived a critique
on Unveiling Time from @lyz
"I really enjoyed your words. Much knowledge in them. All in sync. Well written. Love Lyz. XX" - February 2010
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13 SatReceived a critique
on Unveiling Time from @jetz
"Very nicely done. Your rhythm and rhyme were right on. A nice read indeed. Sue" -
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on Mother Is Calling from @magics02
"Just happen to catch this as I was reading along and this one very genuine and very well to honor both of them. Really nice here. Magics02" -
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on Unveiling Time from @Seren
"No Gibberish here my friend ... I loved it ~! nothing to change its well written and its wonderful to see you posting again ~!~! love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe" -
12 FriCritiqued
"Runaway`s Masquerade " by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"Long live runaway dreams. Exceptional." -
12 FriCritiqued
"Runaway`s Masquerade " by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"Long live runaway dreams. Exceptional." -
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- January 2010
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25 MonReceived a critique
on Is this thing still on? from @Electric Blue
"Cory Wolfe welcome back look forward to all of the above This made me smile which has been lost for a while Your picture it smile full of aluring tales I am sure cannot wait for more more more Ha! Electric Blue" -
09 SatCritiqued
"FLUSHED~~~~" by @lyz
"I feel a moment of silence is needed here…………………………………………………………………………………………………………ok, that’s enough! My wife thinks I’m crazy but I find it to be more humane to introduce those lil buggers to the garbage disposal as oppo…" -
04 MonReceived a critique
on What You Hold from @lyz
"And all that. Lol. This is simply so loving that I feel a little guilty as if I am reading a personal love letter. I can live with the guilt. Lol. Wonderful. And great new pic. And may I add, it is lovely to see Sweetsp…" -
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03 SunCritiqued
"Serious Questions About Werewolves" by @Rett
"Walks in and looks around…says “yep, its official, I knew this day was coming”. Werewolves who sneeze with fleas on their knees…need I say more? I got a serious kick out of it though. Now excuse me while I go scratch my…" -
03 SunCritiqued
"Hungry Jack in a Blue Pontiac." by @lyz
"Screwed, blued and chewed is no way to be…not even for a Pontiac. You tell it well enough, wish I could have seen the original. It's a winner in my eyes either way. Stay well, Lyz Quills" -
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- September 2009
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- August 2009
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26 WedCritiqued
"Sweet Kiss" by @sweetspirit
"Well dang, Darlin…you just posted this barely moments ago and it’s already on spot light…u got it going on over here! You know I’m always a sucker for the tender stuff; I love this poem almost as much as I love you and…" -
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23 SunCritiqued
" Internet Love" by @Geezer
"Unlikely to be realized yes, but I wouldn’t say never, Gee! Coming from someone who initially met his love on-line, I stand before you, three years together now in the flesh, stronger and happier than I’ve ever been. We…" -
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"The Righteous Flames" by @sweetspirit
"Well it most certainly doesn’t suck darling! I thought that it was an epic tale that was rather gripping in nature. It’s quite reminiscent of the days during the great inquisitions when righteous burnings occurred. It w…" -
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Poetry In Motion
- July 2009
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18 SatFirst publication
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18 SatFirst critique offered
on "Moondancer" by @Feebie
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17 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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