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broken_skye
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The Reason.
Tears fall from her face.
Like rain from the sky.
She can't stop.
There is no self-control.
She swings her fists.
And kicks the air.
She is mad.
She found out what you did.
Didn't you think?
That it might have hurt her?
She has feelings.
And you crushed them.
You hurt her.
And there is no coming back.
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After what you did.
Don't come back.
How could you?
Do that to her?
She gave you everything.
And you gave her a broken heart.
You cheated.
And she will never forget it.
In her own bed to.
How rude.
You had everything.
A loving wife and two kids.
What more could you have wanted?
That girl that you said was nothing.
Was the reason.
The reason why your wife left you.
And you should be sorry.
But there is nothing you can do now.
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- July 2010
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10 SatReceived a critique
on The Reason. from @magics02
"Hey no see no long time gal and where is my rain shower? I agree with Julie's assessment here break it down, omit the periods and let it flow honey. You are getting it out and that is good and we just make suggests for…" -
07 WedReceived a critique
on The Reason. from @DawningDaytripper
"Hi Skye, we talked about your poem in chat this moring and I just wanted to let you know. Some suggestions for this poem include, Re thinking your breaks, some of us felt in chat, where we went over your poem. there was…" - June 2010
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22 TueReceived a critique
on What Do I Do? from @Alice Ember
"Having been in this situation at a time i can tel you it's an incomfortable one. Caught between to loves, in one spot the other is better then in the another spot you want to other one. It's a bitter game but, i promise…" -
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- January 2010
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15 FriHighest posting month
January 2010 — 10 poems
- December 2009
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29 TueFirst critique offered
on "Racing Through My Veins" by @destiny
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28 MonFirst publication
Nothing
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27 SunJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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The Reason.
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What Do I Do?
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I Will Miss You.
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Nightmare. Or is it?
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Mask.
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Daddy?
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Carrying The Burden.
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It Was Me All Along.
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It Wasn't You.
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Just One Thing.
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