Giuliana Isabella

Member since April 11, 2009

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Magician

Posted Apr 12, 2010 · 23 lines · 5 critiques

Can you see the delight in my eyes -

Can you tell it's you I am here for?

Oh, to sit so close to you

With your black-clothed leg

Smooth against my skin

The simplest things give me pleasure -

when you let me in.

You lean close -

With your still voice strong

Your eyes deep wells of intrigue,

And your seldom smile beguiles -

You enchant me, magician

Cloaked in dark and silence -

a world I want a part of.

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Will you wrap me in your mystery,

Will you let me charm you some?

You are all I want, my magic man

with your eyes, your smile

and your secret mind

From you, a love for me, dark one

That turns those eyes to mine,

To stare with deep intensity -

to claim me as your own

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April 2024
10 Wed

Anniversary
15 years of membership
April 2019
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Anniversary
10 years of membership
April 2014
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Anniversary
5 years of membership
April 2010
13 Tue

Critiqued
"Stolen Innocence" by @Moloko D. Mahuma
"I can't really call this poem lovely but that is because you have conveyed this terrible moment so that it is very real. Your title is very fitting and I like how it ties into your last stanza (which is excrutiatingly p…"
12 Mon

Received a critique
on Magician from @magics02
"And your picture is mysterious but beautiful too. Look forward to your writes and welcome here to Neopoet. I will be back Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short."
12 Mon

Received a critique
on Magician from @Moloko D. Mahuma
"You have your way of playing with words and that's what I love the most about your poem. It's so beautiful and magical, whoever inspired this poem is indeed a magic man. Moloko"
12 Mon

Received a critique
on Magician from @beautiful nightmare
"BEAUTIFUL, DARK AND INTRICATELY WOVEN X"
12 Mon

Posted a poem
Magician
"Can you see the delight in my eyes -"
Open thread 23 lines
10 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2009
24 Wed

Critiqued
"Barren Ground" by @Rett
"Powerful use of rhyme and rythme to create an emotional piece. Simply stunning, Rett - I absolutely love it. The imagery of sowing seeds in barren ground, the futility, the death where there should be life... Truly beau…"
24 Wed

Critiqued
"these days" by @Craig Norris
"Exquisitley worded and heartfelt, Craig. This is a short but stunning display of emotion and use of the senses. I love it. Giuliana"
22 Mon

Received a critique
on Because of You from @Craig Norris
"and I have a sweet tooth, enjoyed this Giuliana, very nice. Love. Craig"
20 Sat

Received a critique
on Because of You from @Seren
"This is pure senitment that works , except for you last line ...you rhymed all the way through and the change in cadence just left me flat a little ... but other than that it is an awesome piece of work , worth working…"
20 Sat

Posted a poem
Because of You
"I've never felt so comfortable,"
Open thread 16 lines
May 2009
13 Wed

Received a critique
on Untitled from @Dylan T.
"It's a pity that it took such horrid pain to bring out the sweet harmony of this beautiful poem. Such is the human condition. Very well written. I enjoyed it very much. Dylan T."
06 Wed

Posted a poem
Untitled
"Yes the mists hung thick"
Open thread 47 lines
April 2009
23 Thu

Received a critique
on Zephyr from @Craig Norris
"Nice work, loved this journey, I agree with the comments about line structure, it would improve the flow and therefore help to lift this even more. Great poem. Craig"
22 Wed

Received a critique
on Zephyr from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"An absolutely beautiful poem, Guiliana, I loved it. You have some great imagery and stunning words here, a longer write that kept my attention. great job! Peace N Love Katie Go Live & Get rewarded sign up at: www.neopoe…"
22 Wed

Critiqued
"Out of Sight" by @Craig Norris
"You write with an effortless quality that conveys emotion wonderfully. I like the flow of your poem - it has a kind of pensive feel to it too, I think. A lovely read :) -Giuliana Isabella"
22 Wed

Posted a poem
Zephyr
"Zephyr"
Open thread 53 lines
15 Wed

Critiqued
"The Winter The Wolves Found You " by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"Amazing imagery and your words are so strong even though they convey sadness. Your last stanza left me enraptured and leaning toward the computer monitor... This is a stunning poem, Katie. -Giuliana"
14 Tue

Posted a poem
Memories
"Resentment is warm;"
Open thread 30 lines
11 Sat

Critiqued
"Tie-Dye Butterflies" by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"This poem has left me speechless, Katie. It is rich and detailed like a painting or tapestry - each line is alive with energy and imagery. Truely wonderful. Like Nathaniel said in another comment, I love the way you cre…"
11 Sat

First critique offered
on "Tie-Dye Butterflies" by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
11 Sat

First publication
Degredation
11 Sat

Posted a poem
Degredation
"Love burns bright"
Open thread 23 lines
10 Fri

Joined Neopoet
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"Stolen Innocence" by @Moloko D. Mahuma

on Magician from @magics02

on Magician from @Moloko D. Mahuma

on Magician from @beautiful nightmare

One year of membership

"Barren Ground" by @Rett

"these days" by @Craig Norris

on Because of You from @Craig Norris

on Because of You from @Seren

on Untitled from @Dylan T.

on Zephyr from @Craig Norris

on Zephyr from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress

"Out of Sight" by @Craig Norris

"The Winter The Wolves Found You " by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress

"Tie-Dye Butterflies" by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress

on "Tie-Dye Butterflies" by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress

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