Clem

Member since February 8, 2009

Member for 17 years, 4 months

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Pea Pod Love

Posted May 1, 2010 · 11 lines · 2 critiques

Pea Pod Love

They are two peas in a pod.

Both are wrinkled and shriveled,

Rejects by the Green Giant

and the beautiful people.

Their genes are not right,

Their nurture was a fright,
But their marriage a delight.
They love each other with their scars
With care he never cuts her there
And she don't kick him in his genes.

Clem’s timeline

February 2024
07 Wed

Anniversary
15 years of membership
February 2019
07 Thu

Anniversary
10 years of membership
February 2014
07 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
May 2010
27 Thu

Received a critique
on Jackhammer Blowout from @yenti
"A well reconstructed religion that remained unknown but as all faiths it is indestructable because it is a thing of the Spirit world. Great write, Yours Ian.T"
22 Sat

Received a critique
on The Grave Man at His End from @weirdelf
"this poem ways heavily, effectively, but perhaps needs some redemptive aspect? The reader yearns for some insight at his end, not that you need to pander to your reader. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the a…"
03 Mon

Received a critique
on Pea Pod Love from @barbsdad2003
"A dangerous amount of fun you're havin' here! Brought me a smile (or two). Respectfully, Chuck"
01 Sat

Posted a poem
Pea Pod Love
"Pea Pod Love"
Open thread 11 lines
April 2010
27 Tue

Posted a poem
Jackhammer Blowout
"Jackhammer Blowout"
Open thread 35 lines
25 Sun

Posted a poem
As Human Here as He
"As Human Here as He"
Open thread 27 lines
March 2010
26 Fri

Most-discussed work
A Second Kind Of Love

10 critiques to date.
February 2010
07 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
January 2010
15 Fri

Highest posting month
January 2010 — 6 poems
07 Thu

First critique offered
on "Untouchable" by @jesusfreak92
01 Fri

First publication
Dead Ends
February 2009
07 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 328 days later.