Wafi

Member since November 6, 2008

Member for 17 years, 7 months

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41 Poems

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Beauty Of Loneliness

Posted May 13, 2010 · 15 lines · 22 critiques

What is more beautiful
Than my loneliness?
When, in the late hour
Of my lonely night,
You come to me...
Hold my hand
And take me
To the valleys far off
Away from this selfish world of lust...
Where there is none
But you and me...
Melting like ice
In the sunlight of love
To flow
Into the sea of eternity!

Wafi’s timeline

November 2023
05 Sun

Anniversary
15 years of membership
November 2018
05 Mon

Anniversary
10 years of membership
November 2013
05 Tue

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2010
07 Mon

Received a critique
on Love Suicide from @esperanza
"your use of the words in this poem were heart warming, you make me melt! love esperanza xoxo"
May 2010
21 Fri

Received a critique
on Beauty Of Loneliness from @scribbler
"Don't normally like free verse, but liked this easy read.....scribbler"
21 Fri

Received a critique
on Beauty Of Loneliness from @Dalton
"Good to see you back brother. john"
20 Thu

Received a critique
on Desires Suppressed. from @loved
"....Simplicity in poetic parlance Is explicit And Leave everything to the reader to imagine perhaps you have had graver hurts Than what you portray At your young age… Some day you may wash off The stains of sadness With…"
19 Wed

Received a critique
on The Pitcher Of My Heart from @loved
"...made by the lovable hands of God Shall forever remain full Of indelible ink... As words of real love flow And from your own ink Many more shall blow LOVED"
17 Mon

Received a critique
on The Travellers Of Light from @loved
"Your words reverberate In the minds of those human beings Like me who have seen visions In broad daylight… Your imagination and selection of words Of communication Are resounding And Upon the name of love Time shall eng…"
16 Sun

Received a critique
on Intoxicated from @loved
"Wafi ur pedestal is above the clouds one has to fly high to catch u r words and understand their meaning but a little refrain I dare to maintain water can’t, Never be dense… its density is always one the rest of the flu…"
15 Sat

Received a critique
on Beauty Of Loneliness from @loved
"..awaited please do apply ur mind and reply thanks sonny boy"
15 Sat

Critiqued
"Even the Rogue Child is Loved " by @Seren
"Want to place all stars of the sky in your arms, Jayne :) Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~"
15 Sat

Critiqued
"Even the Rogue Child is Loved " by @Seren
""She lives in the heaven you created for her in your heart." Such a beautiful sentence, Ana. You blessed me with a sweet smile and I thank you for that :) Sincerely. Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with…"
15 Sat

Critiqued
"Even the Rogue Child is Loved " by @Seren
"Sorry I am late to this, Jayne but feeling great to read it now. Happy mother's day Jayne, though a late one but they say every day is a mother day, aint it? This indeed, is the greatest mother day poem I read after a l…"
15 Sat

Critiqued
"Residential School" by @xena465
"Sad but a great write, Xena. Read your comments to Anni. Sorry to hear you had a tough time but loved your bravery, Xena. Liked what "Hobo" said about you. Somtimes life meets us with strange looks on its face, but we h…"
15 Sat

Critiqued
"The Peace You Seek" by @magics02
"Great write, dear Mona! Reminds me of a quote; "Faith can move mountains, doubt can creat them." Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~"
13 Thu

Posted a poem
Beauty Of Loneliness
"What is more beautiful"
Open thread 15 lines
09 Sun

Critiqued
"Mother's Day Poem for Mom" by @magics02
"A beautiful poem, Mona. I love my mother a lot and loved this poem too. Have written some mother poems in my native language. Mother indeed is a great blessing. God wanted to personify His love, so he did that by blessi…"
April 2010
07 Wed

Critiqued
"The No Buffer Zone" by @themoonman
"I Can Understand Your Agitation Hahahahahha This made me laugh a lot. Thanks for the laugh dear moonman. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~"
07 Wed

Critiqued
"Intimate audition" by @Ink Dragon
"Wow!!!! Nina, You blessed my morning! What more can we expect from a poet? Love you for this!! Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~"
March 2010
10 Wed

Posted a poem
Pashtun Blood
"Blood of Pashtuns"
Open thread 19 lines
February 2010
11 Thu

Posted a poem
Leaving
"Is this you leaving"
Open thread 14 lines
January 2010
30 Sat

Posted a poem
Intoxicated
"Resisting the pull of gravity,"
Open thread 41 lines
November 2009
05 Thu

Anniversary
One year of membership
October 2009
23 Fri

Posted a poem
The Travellers Of Light
"Here..."
Open thread 86 lines
09 Fri

Posted a poem
Love's Prisoner
"My words are too small..."
Open thread 36 lines
September 2009
06 Sun

Posted a poem
Shauq's Will
"(To His Children)"
Open thread 25 lines
August 2009
11 Tue

Posted a poem
Love Suicide
"It is not possible"
Open thread 14 lines
July 2009
20 Mon

Posted a poem
To A Religious Arrogant
"He is not yours alone,"
Open thread 21 lines
08 Wed

Most-discussed work
Smile

66 critiques to date.
08 Wed

Posted a poem
Smile
" "
Open thread 276 lines
02 Thu

Posted a poem
Ghosts Of Terror
"The roads"
Open thread 30 lines
June 2009
05 Fri

Posted a poem
Longing...
"We--"
Open thread 11 lines
May 2009
15 Fri

Highest posting month
May 2009 — 5 poems
November 2008
12 Wed

First critique offered
on "Icy Black" by @Janice Pearce
10 Mon

First publication
Sometimes It Seems
05 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 4 days later.