Wafi

Member since November 6, 2008

Member for 17 years, 7 months

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Beauty Of Loneliness

Posted May 13, 2010 · 15 lines · 22 critiques

What is more beautiful
Than my loneliness?
When, in the late hour
Of my lonely night,
You come to me...
Hold my hand
And take me
To the valleys far off
Away from this selfish world of lust...
Where there is none
But you and me...
Melting like ice
In the sunlight of love
To flow
Into the sea of eternity!

Wafi’s timeline

November 2023
05 Sun

Anniversary
15 years of membership
November 2018
05 Mon

Anniversary
10 years of membership
November 2013
05 Tue

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2010
07 Mon

Received a critique
on Love Suicide from @esperanza
"your use of the words in this poem were heart warming, you make me melt! love esperanza xoxo"
May 2010
21 Fri

Received a critique
on Beauty Of Loneliness from @scribbler
"Don't normally like free verse, but liked this easy read.....scribbler"
21 Fri

Received a critique
on Beauty Of Loneliness from @Dalton
"Good to see you back brother. john"
13 Thu

Posted a poem
Beauty Of Loneliness
"What is more beautiful"
Open thread 15 lines
March 2010
10 Wed

Posted a poem
Pashtun Blood
"Blood of Pashtuns"
Open thread 19 lines
February 2010
11 Thu

Posted a poem
Leaving
"Is this you leaving"
Open thread 14 lines
November 2009
05 Thu

Anniversary
One year of membership
July 2009
08 Wed

Most-discussed work
Smile

66 critiques to date.
May 2009
15 Fri

Highest posting month
May 2009 — 5 poems
November 2008
12 Wed

First critique offered
on "Icy Black" by @Janice Pearce
10 Mon

First publication
Sometimes It Seems
05 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 4 days later.