Marius Surleac

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Butter-fly fairies of August

Posted Apr 14, 2010 · 16 lines · 4 critiques

Jack is the hobbit that doesn’t give a shit
that his dirty fangs are filtering the air
the levitation buried in ecstasy is important
when laughing, faced backwards,
sun dies for a fucking second though in that
moment of singularity
the opossum faces stop walking and concentrate
their no-shaped words on my skinny potbelly

on the constantly repaired pavements,
some red other blue,
slags offer him the already used flowers
kisses smelling like hormones
and jigsaws melt in his bitumen mind

for a freaking moment I felt
a déjà-vu

sun gave us a blowjob

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First poem published 1 days later.
April 2010
15 Thu

Received a critique
on Butter-fly fairies of August from @Esker
"I remember when the coin dispenser failed to produce my plastic bauble bubble quarter stuck like my life jammed fuck fuck fuck and all is locked behind insidious humour gathered like cheap reputation in the bomb bay of…"
14 Wed

Received a critique
on Butter-fly fairies of August from @Kailashana
"Man, the same thing happened to me just this morning! Smiles, Anna "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles"
14 Wed

Posted a poem
Butter-fly fairies of August
"Jack is the hobbit that doesn’t give a shit"
Open thread 16 lines
13 Tue

Received a critique
on Anthropomorphia from @weirdelf
"sorry I missed this at the time. Great piece, intellesurrealistic, is that a word? It is now. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible"
February 2010
02 Tue

Received a critique
on Anthropomorphia from @whitetea
"I loved the Schrödinger’s cat reference. Very clever write. How did you come up with this?"
January 2010
23 Sat

Received a critique
on Anthropomorphia from @Kailashana
"As always, a pleasure to see and read you. Thank you. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine"
23 Sat

Posted a poem
Anthropomorphia
"my blue dog walks through Alexanderplatz with his"
Open thread 15 lines
May 2009
29 Fri

Received a critique
on Peractio from @Ink Dragon
"this is a very deep poem with several levels or layers of meaning, I like it a lot. However, I have a suggestion. In l.5, I would prefer this word order: "stroke my core within" Oh, and if you mean more than one word in…"
26 Tue

Posted a poem
Peractio
"rest your wounds in my shelter"
Open thread 12 lines
January 2009
23 Fri

Received a critique
on Flashes from @poewriter58
"Thank you for the explanation. I appreciate it Chrys"
23 Fri

Received a critique
on Flashes from @poewriter58
"Dig under me with your bare hands this line does not seem to go with the second until you pass the ribs confusing if the person has dug under then they are already past the ribs are they not the poem is well written but…"
12 Mon

Posted a poem
Corrida - poems with and about angels
"from under the ground trampled"
Open thread 21 lines
11 Sun

Posted a poem
Comptine d'un autre automne
"I run over the seas"
Open thread 18 lines
09 Fri

Critiqued
"Don't look for me" by @Dolor
"Congrats for the spotlight! I like the entire path of the poem, the images strongly sustained by its construction, its own rule is kept until the end. This poem has a nice flow. The final as well - it has its own point…"
09 Fri

Critiqued
"Sanctuary" by @Candlewitch
"Hi Cat I like the serene style, the shape of the poem - here I found poetic maturity combined with dreaming as well. The poem has fluency, figures of speech, inner fire that quenches these words. Well done! Cheers, Mari…"
09 Fri

Critiqued
"midnight status" by @orgami
"There is an inner rush, a sort of dualism between perceptions. The sensations are well described here. The self-imposed "I don't need to" suggests a sensation of fear, but also a self-trust. I like it. Well done. Best w…"
09 Fri

Posted a poem
Flashes
"today"
Open thread 9 lines
October 2008
31 Fri

Posted a poem
Quatrain 5 - evolution
"first step: tasting the Brownian motion"
Open thread 4 lines
01 Wed

Posted a poem
Haiku
"a perfume of death"
Open thread 3 lines
September 2008
28 Sun

Posted a poem
Tiredness - surrealism
"near the dry barrel I laid my arms, my legs"
Open thread 21 lines
26 Fri

Critiqued
"I hate poems like this" by @weirdelf
"I like this one Jess. When reading this poem I remembered the pleasures of mathematics, playing with numbers - it is like a mental orgasm for those who like the science of the numbers. I come with the idea that is quite…"
26 Fri

Critiqued
"threshold:" by @orgami
"I like the descriptions within the poem, the flow. A beautiful poem! Well done! Cheers, Marius"
26 Fri

Posted a poem
Do you?
"do you think I’ll keep my mouth shut when you let me no possibilities to express my nasty personality?"
Open thread 11 lines
15 Mon

Posted a poem
Autumn’s first steps
"first leaf of autumn stroke the back of my head, leaving just tracks"
Open thread 16 lines
August 2008
26 Tue

Posted a poem
Autumn (longing)
"Within the vineyards sun whispers"
Open thread 12 lines
03 Sun

Critiqued
"My Father, My Hero, My Friend (Not my poem, my daughter sent this to me)" by @Rett
"I like it - soft, pleasant and nice memories which we all hope someday we'll have. My favourite line was "My father hung the moon". Well done! Best wishes, Marius"
03 Sun

Critiqued
"Mother's Reach" by @Janice Pearce
"The poem is expressive, tries to get some fractured rhythm and rhyme, the idea is nice but I think that working a bit to the number of syllables and to the poetic style figures would be an excellent one. The memories ar…"
June 2008
28 Sat

Critiqued
"Betrayal (acrostic)" by @Frost Smith
"Hi Frost! I know what implies this kind of structured poetry (The Acrostic) and I like it, but for the moment I keep my concerning on other types of structured poetry. Thank you very much Marius"
15 Sun

Highest posting month
June 2008 — 14 poems
11 Wed

Most-discussed work
Tanka - life and death

22 critiques to date.
April 2008
18 Fri

First critique offered
on "Two Paths" by @purplemoondoll
17 Thu

First publication
Haiku - snooze beneath landscapes

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Location: Romania, ROU

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on Butter-fly fairies of August from @Esker

on Butter-fly fairies of August from @Kailashana

on Anthropomorphia from @weirdelf

on Anthropomorphia from @whitetea

on Anthropomorphia from @Kailashana

on Peractio from @Ink Dragon

on Flashes from @poewriter58

on Flashes from @poewriter58

"Don't look for me" by @Dolor

"Sanctuary" by @Candlewitch

"midnight status" by @orgami

"I hate poems like this" by @weirdelf

"threshold:" by @orgami

"My Father, My Hero, My Friend (Not my poem, my daughter sent this to me)" by @Rett

"Mother's Reach" by @Janice Pearce

"Betrayal (acrostic)" by @Frost Smith

June 2008 — 14 poems

on "Two Paths" by @purplemoondoll

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