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Carchuleto
Member since December 30, 2009
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Overcast
The waves draw near
As I look down to the amber sand
Through the water I see a face
of whom I cannot place
The oncoming surge brings to me a voice
and all is washed away
The wind is almost here
As I look up to the overcast
In the clouds I see a shape
If only my words could just escape
The racing winds deliver a whisper
and all is left a blur
The sun bursts through the overcast
As the winds retreat
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the waves become discrete
From the water emerges a pair of feet
The sun blocks out his face
and at once I look back down to the ground
His plethora of greatness
And the ambiance of his beach
Leaves me breathless and stiff
With every single whiff
Unable to look up, I imagine a face
that if I walked by faith and not by sight
receive a quick glance I simply might
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- December 2024
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15 years of membership
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29 SunAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2014
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29 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2010
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29 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2010
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- February 2010
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21 Sun
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- December 2009
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31 ThuFirst critique offered
on "THE LAST TRIP" by @magics02
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30 WedFirst publication
Through His Grace Eternity Had Passed Him By
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29 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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Location: USA
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Overcast
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Immured By Nature
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In A Maze of Thorns
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The Thick Fuzzy Brown Bear
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The Tenderness of a Teardrop
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