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Damo
Member since October 28, 2010
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The Heir - The Air
E(x)ternal imagined, its energy in-min[(e)(d)]. Equable in-vision:
Impervious eyes. Well faired. in warm winter – Air Is – in-hailed
Then air is. Ex-hailed. Air is. In-took and then is: ex-spelled.
Ex-halting the air – The Heir – Is the(a)ir:
Revoltened. Resinous. Residue;
Re-cyclic remains are rightly returned
Re-changing the flame – re-chaining;
Re-claiming the same: a gain
Again and a gain and again;
Re-naming the smoulders of rain.
The game is plain:- Inside.
In side it is plain – plain’ with his zein; again. And outside
It’s plain – in Time. Out side it’s plain’ in va(e)in.
In place and on going, it’s gone from the main…
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Gone from the main – it trains,
Its lefting the brain:
De-maim.
De-maim, de-suffer – de-suffer the slain.
In-sain’
It’s writing whats left in the brain:
Surrender - a stroke – an inking is spoke
And summonsed a slithery snake
A snake scent to spin
Sneak, swirl and seduce:
A snake scent to strike at the fire.
Soothing; its scolding -
A soul is evolving -
Bandaged by burning: desire.
Damo’s timeline
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15 years of membership
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- October 2010
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28 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- July 2010
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07 WedReceived a critique
on The Heir - The Air from @Shula
"I have discovered your poetry tonight,have only read this one so far,it is cleverly written and the alliteration you have used Impresses the meaning you portray. I shall return and read more another time. sheila" -
06 TueReceived a critique
on The Heir - The Air from @judyanne
"fantasically interesting (w)rite so adore the last three lines take a bow damo love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html" -
06 TueCritiqued
"Redemption " by @Seren
"I often go up to Smith's Lake with friends of mine - they have a little holiday house up there.... love it!" -
06 TueCritiqued
"Out of the dim, a light" by @raskin
"ohh - thanks for givinbg it thgat extra b it of dimension... not being an American, the reference is not immediately recognisable - but now t hat you say it! :-) Hope you had a good Independance Day" - June 2010
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30 WedReceived a critique
on Go - And Get Stuffed. from @R.M.Shanmugam
"a new style. to the point. nice. shan" -
30 WedReceived a critique
on The Heir - The Air from @mona
"it should be nominated too;everybody should read it." -
30 WedReceived a critique
on The Heir - The Air from @mona
"I forgot the stars ,but your poem need all the stars in the sky ,I bow with Seren and Anna." -
30 WedReceived a critique
on The Heir - The Air from @Seren
"Go aussie, I loved this one, painting the words ... I bow with ~A love JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Ch…" -
30 WedReceived a critique
on The Heir - The Air from @mona
"What a crrrrazzy! An abstraction - a meditation… rhyme, aliteration, assonance, onomatopoeia…etc…textured…tonal! good job(wink) MONA" -
30 WedCritiqued
"an ancient light, gathering" by @Kailashana
"The moon/water/tidal theme is strong and beautiful...Passionate poetry - moonlit sexy...Your words are all ways so concentrated...All ways worth re-reading to really let it wash over!" -
30 WedCritiqued
"Wolves and Lambs" by @slybard
"The intro helped me when I read it. I read it out loud in my head and could 'hear' the momentum build... Would be great to hear how you would speak these words..." -
30 WedCritiqued
"humanSexuality a modern version " by @loved
"A 'modern' take... boxed up neatly... if only it were this easy...on second thought thank 'Time' it's not!" -
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30 WedCritiqued
"Love only a pass time" by @R.M.Shanmugam
"Each choice made - countless choices remain unmade...a bird in the hand and all..." -
30 WedCritiqued
"Out of the dim, a light" by @raskin
"Short, sweet, fleeting...like a shadow lost to the shade...every moment a reminder..." -
30 WedReceived a critique
on The Heir - The Air from @Kailashana
"I can only smile and bow in front of a poetic painting. ~A The whole modern world has divided itself into Conservatives and Progressives. The business of Progressives is to go on making mistakes. The business of the Con…" -
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23 WedFirst critique offered
on "Once A Loser" (since unpublished) by @ngaioBeck
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23 WedFirst publication
Class 1A - Poetic Licence (Un-restricted)
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Fly By Night (and Morning Light)
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Making My Way Home
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Selfish Bitch
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