Tessadiana

Member since February 28, 2013

Member for 13 years, 3 months

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Passing by

Posted Mar 7, 2014 · 7 lines · 2 critiques

Everyday passing by
Going tik tok
Playing face, telling lies
Give mock
Never coming near don't
Ring ring
Don't knock

Tessadiana’s timeline

February 2023
28 Tue

Anniversary
10 years of membership
February 2018
28 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
March 2014
07 Fri

Received a critique
on Passing by from @Esker
"ttrying to make sense or control my world..my thoughts.. and i thought of digital the comp language.. 10011101100111010110101001110101011 this language.. then i thought of the one being raised the zero laying flat....wh…"
07 Fri

Received a critique
on Passing by from @Ian.T
"Welcome to your first piece, you have been a member for quite a while now, so it is good that you have at last streamed some writing for us to see. I hope you don't pass us by again good theme just needs more of you, Yo…"
07 Fri

Posted a poem
Passing by
"Everyday passing by"
Open thread 7 lines
February 2014
28 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
February 2013
28 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
February 2010
24 Wed

Received a critique
on my mirror from @mark
"You see, tess, makeup in theory makes one more attractive thus one receives more attention. It is normally an adjunct to what we do in order to boost our self esteem. I comb my hair and shave (as a guy) Now, some do not…"
October 2009
15 Thu

Received a critique
on my mirror from @Candlewitch
"Our culture dictates that we be obsessed with youth and beauty, just to fit in. I like the title. I wrote a poem similar to this one, titled "Come September" it is from an older persons point of view. The language usage…"
14 Wed

Posted a poem
my mirror
"I look into the mirror"
Open thread 19 lines
February 2009
08 Sun

Received a critique
on the riddle from @Arrow
"I'm not sure how kings fit in, though."
08 Sun

Posted a poem
the riddle
"cut me and i bleed red"
Open thread 9 lines
January 2009
31 Sat

Posted a poem
the name of a fairy
"        fairy come out now"
Open thread 15 lines
24 Sat

Received a critique
on almost murderer ,my first kill, and my love all in one from @weirdelf
"Strong strong allegory (I hope) and totally relate. Have torn each other to pieces in past love affairs This is the sort of brave, gutsy poetry we need here, not Hallmark sentimentality cheers, Jess"
22 Thu

Received a critique
on confessions of a reject from @Cindy Lou
"I've been realilizing that I use bigger words and all this crazy stuff. It's almost insane. Oh, by the way, love the moose. Just a little obsessed. Sarah."
21 Wed

Posted a poem
almost murderer ,my first kill, and my love all in one
"blood"
Open thread 26 lines
18 Sun

Received a critique
on HAHAHAHAhahahaahHAAHAHAHAA from @poewriter58
"correct spelling scene. Wow talk about random thoughts but you bring them all together Chrys"
17 Sat

Posted a poem
HAHAHAHAhahahaahHAAHAHAHAA
"Once apon I time I truly am insane"
Open thread 39 lines
15 Thu

Posted a poem
HAHAHAHAhahahaahHAAHAHAHAA
"Once apon I time I truly am insane"
Open thread 20 lines
15 Thu

Posted a poem
mistakes
"all around us"
Open thread 40 lines
14 Wed

Posted a poem
life life live life life die
"life is a lie"
Open thread 20 lines
12 Mon

Posted a poem
confessions of a reject
"moisture"
Open thread 33 lines
09 Fri

Posted a poem
sweet valentine
"Richie ,he was beautiful"
Open thread 21 lines
08 Thu

Posted a poem
wise oak tree
"wise oak tree show me the way"
Open thread 9 lines
November 2008
24 Mon

Critiqued
"Promise" by @James X
"oh very pretty ...kinda reminds me of my poem "you are my everything" it is a list of things someone shows to you.........this is very niice Tessadiana"
15 Sat

Highest posting month
November 2008 — 12 poems
13 Thu

Critiqued
"Those Eyes" by @Notso
"very pretty Tessadiana"
13 Thu

Critiqued
"......And We Liked It......" by @Lonnie
"pretty and it seems like your there ....there is real passion when u write it shows Tessadiana"
13 Thu

Critiqued
"My Favorite Storm" by @Tink
"pretty Tessadiana"
09 Sun

Critiqued
"Ain't My Place" by @Michael Dylan-Joyce
"pretty Tessadiana"
07 Fri

Critiqued
"THORNS (acrostic)" by @mark
"oooohhhh very pretty Tessadiana"
05 Wed

Critiqued
"Thed Meaning of Family" by @Tink
"very pretty and realization starting Tessadiana"
October 2008
30 Thu

Critiqued
"CONFESSION OF A WORLD CELEBRITY" by @zarul
"very pretty ....it kinda reminds me of peris hilton i bet she feels this way ...very insightful Tessadiana"
25 Sat

First critique offered
on "Leaf" by @Kailashana
24 Fri

First publication
out there
24 Fri

Most-discussed work
out there

14 critiques to date.