Tragic_Bliss

Member since September 4, 2012

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Colors

Posted Sep 4, 2012 · 9 lines · 2 critiques

Blue sky’s, Green trees, all this beauty brings me to my knees.
White moon, Yellow sun, playing all day just for fun.
Red roses, Pink flowers, thinking about her for more then an hour.
All these colors mean so much, but all these colors I can not touch.
A life with no colors is like a life with no brain, the less colors I see the more I go insane.
Grey rain, Brown mud, many of lifes ended with a loud thud.
Black writing as i scribble and scratch on my paper.
I wish it was over, I wish it was later.
All these colors mean so much, but all these colors i can not touch.

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September 2012
10 Mon

Received a critique
on Colors from @Candlewitch
"The one suggestion I would make, is: Go to single spaceing of the lines to crisp it up a bit. This poem has an interesting premise. I like the theme. always, Cat"
05 Wed

Received a critique
on Colors from @weirdelf
"unless you change the status from "not actively editing". I think it has potential but needs work."
04 Tue

Posted a poem
Colors
"Blue sky’s, Green trees, all this beauty brings me to my knees. "
Open thread 9 lines
04 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
June 2010
18 Fri

Received a critique
on One Night from @lou
"Have to agree with JayCee, this is the beginning of a poem, but the start of a good poem. Lou xx"
18 Fri

Received a critique
on One Night from @Seren
"How do I get you to finish this write ? I know you've said it in four lines but I wanted more sorry but I did lol smile love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is…"
18 Fri

Received a critique
on One Night from @shane
"I love this poem. Just four little lines that say so much, how we all have felt at one time or another. Great job!"
18 Fri

Critiqued
"Blood on the Stairs of Hope " by @Seren
"I really liked this.. it kinda spoke to me and reminded me of my friend .."
18 Fri

Posted a poem
One Night
"Do you love me, like I love you?"
Open thread 4 lines
March 2009
12 Thu

Received a critique
on Sniper from @docmaverick
"...that your "sniper", left me a tad bit, cold. I imagine that the life of a sniper HAS to be more complex than the style you have used, would suggest. I can't see it being so "simple". Having said that about the theme…"
11 Wed

Received a critique
on Sniper from @Janice Pearce
"Excellent write for the subject matter~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous"
March 2008
24 Mon

Received a critique
on I Find Myself from @asiajy
""I find myself" doesn't have to be repeated so much. The italics and centering make it aesthetically pleasing and images immediately popped into my head while reading, but seeing "I find myself" so much kind of threw me…"
19 Wed

Posted a poem
I Find Myself
" "
Open thread 22 lines
13 Thu

Critiqued
"Slightly Broken" by @blistered-pen
"you write with your heart and i really like that in writers. $DEY KNOW$"
13 Thu

Posted a poem
Thinking of you..............
"Thinking of you, and your soft sweet lips."
Open thread 17 lines
13 Thu

Critiqued
" A little something" by @themoonman
"but i thought it was spelled really not realy......... slang maybe.... lol $DEY KNOW$"
13 Thu

Critiqued
"The Demon that grips me" by @Calliope
"me of a person struggling with an inner spirit. $DEY KNOW$"
13 Thu

Critiqued
"A Mind At War" by @bayoujeanette
"there is a typo Know should be known................. but i really liked the work. this reminded me of a friend i have that was in the bay of pigs. one of the original navy seals.$DEY KNOW$"
February 2008
26 Tue

Critiqued
"Killing Me !" by @DarkinAZ
"you have amazed me beyond words that i cant spell $DEY KNOW$"
26 Tue

Posted a poem
Streams of light
"Yellow, red orange, blue, these streams of light keep moving through,"
Open thread 9 lines
26 Tue

Critiqued
"Not about you" by @DarkinAZ
"i really like your writing and if you keep it up i will also $DEY KNOW$"
23 Sat

Critiqued
"LOVE BECOMES PAIN" by @scooby
"lose the caps and it will sound so much better i know i had to do it on 3 of my own :P$DEY KNOW$"
23 Sat

Posted a poem
I hold my destiny in my hand
"Loveing you is what I did best,"
Open thread 19 lines
23 Sat

Posted a poem
Roses
"Twenty-four roses illustrate love"
Open thread 3 lines
22 Fri

Posted a poem
"V" day
"This day is full of red, this day is full of cheer."
Open thread 17 lines
22 Fri

Posted a poem
Labled
"love is something i used to feel"
Open thread 11 lines
22 Fri

Posted a poem
Killing 101
"cold, angry and excited as can be,"
Open thread 15 lines
22 Fri

Posted a poem
Marshall lake
"As I saw you and I saw that smile,"
Open thread 10 lines
22 Fri

Posted a poem
Life Lost
"Love is something I used to feel"
Open thread 12 lines
20 Wed

First critique offered
on "What is this?" by @RandomThoughts
20 Wed

First publication
Sniper
15 Fri

Highest posting month
February 2008 — 17 poems

About Me

About me

I'm a young man that used too write a lot. Saw my poems from 2008 on here and decided to get back into writing.

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on Colors from @Candlewitch

on Colors from @weirdelf

Membership begins

on One Night from @lou

on One Night from @Seren

on One Night from @shane

"Blood on the Stairs of Hope " by @Seren

on Sniper from @docmaverick

on Sniper from @Janice Pearce

on I Find Myself from @asiajy

"Slightly Broken" by @blistered-pen

" A little something" by @themoonman

"The Demon that grips me" by @Calliope

"A Mind At War" by @bayoujeanette

"Killing Me !" by @DarkinAZ

"Not about you" by @DarkinAZ

"LOVE BECOMES PAIN" by @scooby

on "What is this?" by @RandomThoughts

February 2008 — 17 poems

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